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 "Street Walk to Ramp Walk"

· As you've read the title so there must be a lot of questions were getting raised in your mind that what does it really suppose to mean? Ok, so let me clear out your thoughts. Let me take you back to the cold and windy evening of february 7th, 2019. It was the date that i couldn't forget. It was my first ever professional modeling audition which was held in Karachi. So, there were a lot of girls and boys present there for the audition and i was the only one belong to Hyderabad. There were plenty of professional judges sitting there to take the auditions of participants. The company who were organizing this whole event was titles as "World Women Fashion Organiziation" and their main motive is to promote the talent of Pakistan nationwide and overseas. The categories were inlcluding music, modeling, acting, ancherperson, dancing. And i was the part of modeling category.

· So approximately there were 70+ boys who attended the first audition and after the first audition there were only 20 boys who got selected for the further process it means there were still 2 auditions left and it was making me worry that what will happen next but i was full confident that if i passed this so i can pass the upcoming audtion as well and make it to the Finale. So after few days i got the call for the second audition and once again i got selected. Now it's about the major and final audition and when i got the call from the organization for the 3rd audition so i hit the spot immediately and when i arrived there i saw the professional contenders were sitting there and it gave me a lil bit shock that they were more experienced contenders were sitting there, coming from various talent agencies and i was the only one among them without any experience. But i still believed on Almighty that i made it to this spot so i will make it to the final selection call. Now it time to walk infront of judges and wait for their decision. So on the last audition there were 20 guys and only 14 got selected for the main event, where you wear the branded clothes and do the ramp walk. So the judges came out from their room and call out 14 names and from 1st to 13th name there was no accouncement made for my name and the last name they announced was mine. I was so happy and cherished at that moment and we all were hugging each other then we went home.

· After all this audition process it's about to do the show rehearsal now the professional models from Karachi trained all of the 14 boys. The main event show date was announced and it was 30 March, 2019 at Marriot Hotel, Karachi.

· In the middle of rehearsals the organization takes some more auditions for completing the set of 20 males. So the addition was of 6 more boys to complete the whole set. So after adding them now the total amount of male models were 20. There were female models as well doing the rehearsals and they were also the part of this organization.

· So this was the time to show our talent in front of the world. I was so excited for this day . Then I reached Mariot hotel , the envoirment there was of next level the stage, ramp, red carpet were giving me goosebumps. There were many people around there making preprations , rehearsals and there were many more reknown organizations of modeling who were also presenting famous professional models . By seeing them i also get motivated that i will work with them. After seeing all this we were called backstage there were makup artists present who were grooming our team for the ramp walk.

· After we were done with makeover the brand owner arrives with his collection of dresses . everyone was given there dresses and then finally we were ready to charm the event . At that time other brands were presenting there collections .

· It was the  night to remember and im glad that i was a part of it. It was a great moment that i walked on a ramp infront of huge crowd.

· I must say that if you struggle for something you really want so you will achieve it. I was representing my city and i felt so proud.