Aleena Jokhio PUCCA QILLA feature

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JOURNEY OF PUCCA QILLA TO A SMALL ROOM

The fascinating peccaqilla is the real sight of the political incidents of Sindh that was constructed near Hyderabad railway station by Ghulam Shah Kalhoro in 1978 and still exist in natural ? shape. It is written that the fort once in history (proper reference for attribution, anonymous attribution is not accepted)  was filled with gardens, large palaces and other beautiful structures. It was built 80feet heighted and 30 eacrs of Land having different structure of red bricks, stones and immense thickness where 1800 dwelling houses lives there. (new para)The downfall begun in 1843 and still continues towards devasting condition. Many walls fall down the only wall of peccaqilla shows remain of the fort. Rains drainage System and many other problems are the causes of destructive lines to the fort which can be clearly seen upon entering the fort. Despite of all the problems the people/resident of peccaqilla have been provided plots in latifabad by government of Sindh but the resident aren’t ready to move to other places looming safety issues. 

The locals  ?? says they born here lived here for decades with there ancestors and will die here too no worries  what worst conditions are it is impossible to survive somewhere else out of.... fortmany locals while talking to Roshni (here u are not roshni its ur personal)  says the treasure and property of their ancestors is buried into the coffin it would be foolish decision to move from here . 

(New Para) Currently Mir Haram (describe what is it?) is the room that only stand in fort was built during  the reign of Mir Fateh Ali Talpur (who is this gentleman? describe) its beauty and work of walls and roofs can’t be ignored. The interior of Haram is decorated with fresco paintings, though of degenerated quality.the five halls towards east of Haram was the place where Mirs treasury was located three of them are converted into small beautiful museum for representation of monument of Sindh. (new para) Due to passage of time the qilla is suffering great damage. 

While talking to Qasim Ali Shah Director Archeology says the projects for the renovation of fort has been sent to the Government soon the work will be started. The Archeology department is dealing with great challenges and trying best to protect the monuments of historical places.