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ZARYAB KHAN
BS-III
2K17/MC/106
Edited by
Zaryab Khan
Is Less Greenery a Cause of Heatstroke?
We are living in 21st century, and our world is digitalize day by day. This digitalization make our life easy and comfortable but this digitalization take part in destroying our environment. The basic thing of environment is greenery which are going less day by day because of industries waste, high acidic chemicals, heavy machinery, urbanization and so on. Beside this our lifestyle is also contributing in demolitions of our environment.
If we compare the 80s-90s lifestyle and today’s lifestyle, there is a huge difference. In 80s-90s people lived in small houses with Ventilators (Roshandan), but nowadays people are living in big buildings without or fewer ventilators (Roshandan) and all buildings are huge which make the barrier for air crossing in houses. In 80s- 90s the world covered with greenery that was one of the biggest reason people lived a healthy life, but nowadays the world is converting green into gray because of deforestation, people cuts the trees and forests and make their cites, huge buildings and so on, that’s why today’s people is less healthy than the 80s-90s people. According to the U. N Food and Agriculture report data from 1990 to 2010, in 1990 world forest cover 4168.399 million hectares and in 2010 its 4033.06 million hectares.
Climate change is also a biggest cause of less greenery which increasing the global warming, which is the biggest threat to our world. Because of global warming, the intensity of the heat wave increasing day by day and cause of heatstroke. Nowadays, heatstroke is the highlighted issue for all over the world. Heatstroke is a state when our body is overheated because of physical exertion in high temperatures. The serious form of injury occurs through the heatstroke when body temperature rises to about 104 F (40C) or above. Heatstroke wants emergency treatment. Untreated heatstroke can damage the brain, kidney, muscle and heart.
In Pakistan, the extreme heat wave with the temperature as high as 49C (120F) struck southern areas in June 2015. It caused the death of About 2,000 People from heatstroke. Mostly heatstroke affected Sindh province and its capital city Karachi. The recorded temperature in Sindh of June 2015 was (Karachi 45C, Larkana 49C, Turbat 49C, Sibi 49C, Rahim Yar Khan 43C, Dadu 44C, Multan 40C, Nawabshah 41C, Hyderabad 42C). The main cause of Sindh effected most by heatstroke instead of other provinces is an alarming rate of deforestation in Sindh. The forest of Sindh has reduced up to 1.90% from 5.11%. According to the governmental data, high deforestation in Sindh took place in 1979-2010. Riverine forest in Hyderabad and Nawabshah districts reduced to 0.72%, whereas 2.93% in Larkana, Dadu and Khairpur district during this period. Deforestation is still going on the higher rate, which is the biggest threat for Sindh and Pakistan too.
If we cut the trees and forests at this rate so it will produce harmful condition for us and make hurdle for people to live their life.
Start with current. add few lines or make second last para as first para and then make changes accordingly.
Present intro seems very old and traditional
.Editors pls note
ZARYAB KHAN
BS-III
2K17/MC/106
Is Less Greenery a Cause of Heatstroke?
Greenery consists of plants, herbs and trees that surrounds us. Greenery helps us to reverse the
effects of global warming, which is prevalent around the world. Green trees also helped us to
bring the rainfall because green trees are known to attract the clouds. Preservation of greenery
is the must for our existence in this world. But sadly, growing population and urbanization
destroy the greenery of the world and our lifestyle is also contributing to it.
If we compare the 80s-90s lifestyle and today’s lifestyle, there is a huge difference. In the 80s-
90s, people have fewer technologies than today, but they were more active than today’s
people. They lived in small houses with Ventilators (Roshandan) and they had no barrier in air
crossing, but nowadays people are living in big buildings without or fewer ventilators
(Roshandan) and all buildings are huge which make the barrier for air crossing in houses. In 80s-
90s the world covered with greenery that was one of the biggest reasons people lived a
healthy life, but nowadays the world is converting green into gray because of deforestation,
people cuts the trees and forests and make their cites, huge buildings, Industries and so on,
which cause of different diseases (such as lung problem, breathing problem and more) that’s
why today’s people is less healthy than the 80s-90s people. According to the U. N Food and
Agriculture report data from 1990 to 2010, in 1990 world forest cover 4168.399 million
hectares and in 2010 its 4033.06 million hectares.
Climate change is also a biggest cause of less greenery which increase the greenhouse effects,
which deplete our ozone layer, ozone depletion increase the global warming which is the
biggest threat to our world. Because of global warming, the intensity of the heat wave increases
day by day and cause of heatstroke. Nowadays, heatstroke is the highlighted issue for all over
the world. Heatstroke is a state when our body is overheated because of physical exertion in
high temperatures. The serious form of injury occurs through the heatstroke when body
temperature rises to about 104 F (40C) or above. Heatstroke wants emergency treatment.
Untreated heatstroke can damage the brain, kidney, muscle and heart. Heatstroke increases
the risk of serious complications or death. The main symptoms of heatstroke are high body
temperature, headache, altered mental state or behavior, vomiting, rapid breathing and
alteration in sweating. The main causes of heatstroke are exposure to a hot environment,
strenuous activity and wearing excess clothing. The risk factor of heatstroke are Age, Exertion in
hot weather, Sudden exposure to hot weather, A lack of air conditioning, Certain health
conditions.
In Pakistan, the extreme heat wave with the temperature as high as 49C (120F) struck southern
areas in June 2015. It caused the death of About 2,000 People from heatstroke. Mostly
heatstroke affected Sindh province and its capital city Karachi. The heatstroke also targeted the
lives of animals and countless livestock. The recorded temperature in Sindh of June 2015 was
(Karachi 45C, Larkana 49C, Turbat 49C, Sibi 49C, Rahim Yar Khan 43C, Dadu 44C, Multan 40C,
Nawabshah 41C, Hyderabad 42C). The main cause of Sindh effected most by heatstroke instead
of other provinces is an alarming rate of deforestation in Sindh. The forest of Sindh has reduced
up to 1.90% from 5.11%. According to the governmental data, high deforestation in Sindh took
place in 1979-2010. Riverine forest in Hyderabad and Nawabshah districts reduced to 0.72%,
whereas 2.93% in Larkana, Dadu and Khairpur district during this period. Deforestation is still
going on the higher rate, which is the biggest threat for Sindh and Pakistan too.
If we cut the trees and forests at this rate so it will produce harmful condition for us and make
huddle for people to live their life. We should start the movement for plantation, aware the
people about the importance of Greenery and tell them how our lifestyle affects our climate,
also alert to the people about the heatstroke and make familiar them the solution of
heatstroke, and also need work in the forest protection department.
BS-III
2K17/MC/106
Edited by
Zaryab Khan
Is Less Greenery a Cause of Heatstroke?
We are living in 21st century, and our world is digitalize day by day. This digitalization make our life easy and comfortable but this digitalization take part in destroying our environment. The basic thing of environment is greenery which are going less day by day because of industries waste, high acidic chemicals, heavy machinery, urbanization and so on. Beside this our lifestyle is also contributing in demolitions of our environment.
If we compare the 80s-90s lifestyle and today’s lifestyle, there is a huge difference. In 80s-90s people lived in small houses with Ventilators (Roshandan), but nowadays people are living in big buildings without or fewer ventilators (Roshandan) and all buildings are huge which make the barrier for air crossing in houses. In 80s- 90s the world covered with greenery that was one of the biggest reason people lived a healthy life, but nowadays the world is converting green into gray because of deforestation, people cuts the trees and forests and make their cites, huge buildings and so on, that’s why today’s people is less healthy than the 80s-90s people. According to the U. N Food and Agriculture report data from 1990 to 2010, in 1990 world forest cover 4168.399 million hectares and in 2010 its 4033.06 million hectares.
Climate change is also a biggest cause of less greenery which increasing the global warming, which is the biggest threat to our world. Because of global warming, the intensity of the heat wave increasing day by day and cause of heatstroke. Nowadays, heatstroke is the highlighted issue for all over the world. Heatstroke is a state when our body is overheated because of physical exertion in high temperatures. The serious form of injury occurs through the heatstroke when body temperature rises to about 104 F (40C) or above. Heatstroke wants emergency treatment. Untreated heatstroke can damage the brain, kidney, muscle and heart.
In Pakistan, the extreme heat wave with the temperature as high as 49C (120F) struck southern areas in June 2015. It caused the death of About 2,000 People from heatstroke. Mostly heatstroke affected Sindh province and its capital city Karachi. The recorded temperature in Sindh of June 2015 was (Karachi 45C, Larkana 49C, Turbat 49C, Sibi 49C, Rahim Yar Khan 43C, Dadu 44C, Multan 40C, Nawabshah 41C, Hyderabad 42C). The main cause of Sindh effected most by heatstroke instead of other provinces is an alarming rate of deforestation in Sindh. The forest of Sindh has reduced up to 1.90% from 5.11%. According to the governmental data, high deforestation in Sindh took place in 1979-2010. Riverine forest in Hyderabad and Nawabshah districts reduced to 0.72%, whereas 2.93% in Larkana, Dadu and Khairpur district during this period. Deforestation is still going on the higher rate, which is the biggest threat for Sindh and Pakistan too.
If we cut the trees and forests at this rate so it will produce harmful condition for us and make hurdle for people to live their life.
Start with current. add few lines or make second last para as first para and then make changes accordingly.
Present intro seems very old and traditional
.Editors pls note
ZARYAB KHAN
BS-III
2K17/MC/106
Is Less Greenery a Cause of Heatstroke?
Greenery consists of plants, herbs and trees that surrounds us. Greenery helps us to reverse the
effects of global warming, which is prevalent around the world. Green trees also helped us to
bring the rainfall because green trees are known to attract the clouds. Preservation of greenery
is the must for our existence in this world. But sadly, growing population and urbanization
destroy the greenery of the world and our lifestyle is also contributing to it.
If we compare the 80s-90s lifestyle and today’s lifestyle, there is a huge difference. In the 80s-
90s, people have fewer technologies than today, but they were more active than today’s
people. They lived in small houses with Ventilators (Roshandan) and they had no barrier in air
crossing, but nowadays people are living in big buildings without or fewer ventilators
(Roshandan) and all buildings are huge which make the barrier for air crossing in houses. In 80s-
90s the world covered with greenery that was one of the biggest reasons people lived a
healthy life, but nowadays the world is converting green into gray because of deforestation,
people cuts the trees and forests and make their cites, huge buildings, Industries and so on,
which cause of different diseases (such as lung problem, breathing problem and more) that’s
why today’s people is less healthy than the 80s-90s people. According to the U. N Food and
Agriculture report data from 1990 to 2010, in 1990 world forest cover 4168.399 million
hectares and in 2010 its 4033.06 million hectares.
Climate change is also a biggest cause of less greenery which increase the greenhouse effects,
which deplete our ozone layer, ozone depletion increase the global warming which is the
biggest threat to our world. Because of global warming, the intensity of the heat wave increases
day by day and cause of heatstroke. Nowadays, heatstroke is the highlighted issue for all over
the world. Heatstroke is a state when our body is overheated because of physical exertion in
high temperatures. The serious form of injury occurs through the heatstroke when body
temperature rises to about 104 F (40C) or above. Heatstroke wants emergency treatment.
Untreated heatstroke can damage the brain, kidney, muscle and heart. Heatstroke increases
the risk of serious complications or death. The main symptoms of heatstroke are high body
temperature, headache, altered mental state or behavior, vomiting, rapid breathing and
alteration in sweating. The main causes of heatstroke are exposure to a hot environment,
strenuous activity and wearing excess clothing. The risk factor of heatstroke are Age, Exertion in
hot weather, Sudden exposure to hot weather, A lack of air conditioning, Certain health
conditions.
In Pakistan, the extreme heat wave with the temperature as high as 49C (120F) struck southern
areas in June 2015. It caused the death of About 2,000 People from heatstroke. Mostly
heatstroke affected Sindh province and its capital city Karachi. The heatstroke also targeted the
lives of animals and countless livestock. The recorded temperature in Sindh of June 2015 was
(Karachi 45C, Larkana 49C, Turbat 49C, Sibi 49C, Rahim Yar Khan 43C, Dadu 44C, Multan 40C,
Nawabshah 41C, Hyderabad 42C). The main cause of Sindh effected most by heatstroke instead
of other provinces is an alarming rate of deforestation in Sindh. The forest of Sindh has reduced
up to 1.90% from 5.11%. According to the governmental data, high deforestation in Sindh took
place in 1979-2010. Riverine forest in Hyderabad and Nawabshah districts reduced to 0.72%,
whereas 2.93% in Larkana, Dadu and Khairpur district during this period. Deforestation is still
going on the higher rate, which is the biggest threat for Sindh and Pakistan too.
If we cut the trees and forests at this rate so it will produce harmful condition for us and make
huddle for people to live their life. We should start the movement for plantation, aware the
people about the importance of Greenery and tell them how our lifestyle affects our climate,
also alert to the people about the heatstroke and make familiar them the solution of
heatstroke, and also need work in the forest protection department.
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